Appendix 06: Example CRITIC Session: A Live Demo
This is a sample transcript of a full CRITIC loop — using the AI as a coach, critic, and journal. Use it as a reference or template for your own sessions.
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participant U as User
participant AI as AI (CRITIC Mode)
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Note over U,AI: 🧗 Coach Phase (Start of Session)
AI->>U: What's the most valuable thing you could accomplish?
U->>AI: Explain CRITIC framework clearly.
AI->>U: If you could only do one great thing here?
U->>AI: Make this chapter personal and transformative.
AI->>U: Where are you holding back?
U->>AI: Unsure how vulnerable to be.
AI->>U: How could you challenge yourself?
U->>AI: Stay fully present, don't jump to other sections.
AI->>U: Summary: Aiming for clarity, emotional depth, personal truth.
end
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Note over U,AI: 🔍 Critic Phase (Midway Reflection)
AI->>U: What's working right now?
U->>AI: Energy, tone, honesty.
AI->>U: What's missing?
U->>AI: One more concrete example.
AI->>U: Where's the heat?
U->>AI: The mirror—how AI reflects mental patterns.
AI->>U: What would take this to the next level?
U->>AI: Include a guided prompt they can try.
AI->>U: Feedback: Structure is strong; bring the user into the loop.
end
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Note over U,AI: 📓 Journal Phase (End of Session)
AI->>U: Summarize what we've done.
U->>AI: Wrote the heart of CRITIC, proved the process.
AI->>U: What did you learn about yourself?
U->>AI: I still hold back, but leaning in transforms the work.
AI->>U: What questions should we revisit?
U->>AI: How to introduce journaling without overwhelming flow.
AI->>U: What's worth remembering?
U->>AI: Readers need the experience, not just the explanation.
end
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Note over U,AI: ✅ Summary
AI->>U: CRITIC loop: Coach → Critic → Journal. Use this structure to grow.
end
🧗 Coach Phase (Start of Session)
AI: What’s the most valuable thing you could accomplish in this session?
User: I want to clearly explain the CRITIC framework in a way that sticks with readers.
AI: If you could only do one great thing here, what should it be?
User: Make this chapter the most personal and transformative one in the book.
AI: Where are you holding back right now?
User: I’m still unsure how vulnerable I want to be about my own process. I don’t want to make it too abstract.
AI: How could you challenge yourself in the next hour?
User: Stay fully present. Write the entire section without jumping out to tweak previous ones. Stay in the flow.
AI Summary: You’re aiming for clarity, emotional depth, and personal truth. Your challenge isn’t technical—it’s about staying real. That’s the work.
🔍 Critic Phase (Midway Reflection)
AI: What’s working right now?
User: The energy. The tone. The honesty. It feels alive.
AI: What’s missing?
User: Maybe one more concrete example. Something they can see themselves doing.
AI: Where’s the heat?
User: When I talked about the mirror—how the AI reflects your mental patterns. That’s the hook.
AI: What would take this to the next level?
User: Include a guided prompt they can paste and try right away.
AI Feedback: The structure is strong. The clarity is high. But the magic will be in the example that lives it. Bring the user into the loop.
📓 Journal Phase (End of Session)
AI: Summarize what we’ve done today.
User: We wrote the heart of Chapter 7, clarified the CRITIC acronym, and proved the process works by living it.
AI: What did you learn about yourself?
User: That I still hold back more than I think—but when I lean in, the work transforms.
AI: What questions should we revisit next time?
User: How do we introduce journaling as a full chapter without overwhelming the flow?
AI: What’s worth remembering?
User: That readers need the experience, not just the explanation. Let them feel what this can do.
✅ Summary
This session shows how the CRITIC loop works in real time:
- Start with grounding (coach)
- Get feedback in the moment (critic)
- Reflect before you exit (journal)
Use this structure to guide any session where your goal is not just to build something—but to grow.